This story was going so nicely and then the final chapters were just so bleh; I felt like the end was just so rushed.
We get a funny meeting scene between Mick Atwell and Lucy Waverly; which by the way know-it-all big brothers should not share certain stories with their best friend's. Mick and Lucy worked really well throughout the whole story and seemed like a very well set couple, but then at the end it just went wrong. When Mick finally comes back to grovel to Lucy, there really isn't any groveling or "let me think about it" from Lucy. Plus the whole scene with Lucy's ex-boss and what was supposed to be an action packed moment just fell flat.
I've read a few of Ms. Marks stories and I'm usually very impressed, however, although this one was good, it wasn't great.
Rating 3.5 out of 5